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Story didn't go anywhere
65 4 ReplyWell yeah, it's a slice of life, not the Hero's Journey.
96 0 ReplyThis motherfucker when their wife tells them about their day: there was no beginning, middle, or end; the climax wasn't revealed in chronological order; the hero is clearly a Mary-Sue...
65 2 ReplyIts totally the heros journey, libertarian fanfic, long john silvers AU
5 1 ReplyLong John silvers gold?
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Could've made it more interesting though
1 0 ReplyYeah could've added some fiction at the end like a cute girl walks in and they live happily ever after.
2 0 ReplyIdk about adding, I would've just changed what is already there to be more interesting
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One of the more believable greentexts I’ve read, and likely for this reason.
37 2 Replyyeah, stories dont walk, duh
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