[OC] angry nonsense written upon waking from a nightmare
[OC] angry nonsense written upon waking from a nightmare
(please ignore the typographical error lol)
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Best marriage vowels ever. I'd marry a stranger with that proposal.
OP clearly into Vore.
For anyone who doesn't know what that is, I'm sorry, no need to Google it, that last paragraph is all you need to be burdened with.
this is about spiritual vore not physical vore
Spiritual vore? Now that's a kink I can get behind.
In all sincerity it's a lovely poem OP, it really resonated with me, thank you for posting 😊
thanks, this is my first jab at writing a poem, glad you liked it. honestly I kinda regret producing something so jaded and angry but yknow I wrote it and posted it so it's kinda a done deal
It's really good, the main theme I'm getting from it is loneliness and strong urge for companionship which is something a lot of people can relate to. But that's only how it starts.
It goes from a settling-down mentality, to the speaker ignoring their own needs as a "sacrifice" for the other person, then asking for very big commitments, and finally resulting in that spiritual vore of the other person because of the real one-sided dependency.
The main takeaway I'm getting from it (i.e. the meaning I'm choosing to project so, you know, it's just an opinion) is that it's a warning not to force one's self into relationship out of loneliness.
I really appreciate your analysis! I didn't have any specific moral-of-the-story in mind when writing this, but I can definitely see how you could take it as a warning. I wrote this groggy as shit with the nightmare still in my head so your interpretation is as good as mine haha. Maybe it is a warning from my subconscious or something like that. I am constantly having these nightmares about loneliness, co-dependence, sacrifice, etc and I thought writing about it would help me process it. Time will tell
Definitely writing it down helps with processing thoughts. I've been writing down any ideas in my head (99% of which are crap which is expected) so I'm not constantly thinking about them.
It exorcises the demons.